The Dialogue Scene Revision

 A couple weeks ago, I revised one scene that was quite hard to read and was problematic down the road. It was the dialogue scene between the adults, Griffin and Emma. I could definitely clean it up a bit and change up some of the wording but here it is in all of its current glory. 


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